Living Vengeance

Just some of the things people have said about my work:

chanel 5: I like annette, and I really like No Fear Buffy.

MarzBar: I love this story! Buffy as a vengeance demon is great! I hope she figures a way to get more vengeance on the Wankers' Council and Angelus. More please.

Mali: Please... Spuffiness? Loving this.

~*~Tasha~*~: My poor heart is aching for Buffy. At least William does know that he was her first. Angelus knowing that Buffy is a vengeance demon now is a good twist in it too.

Look forward to more.

Amalia: Intriguing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and how the rest of the it goes.

chanel 5: I like. Plus, what an original idea!

~*~Tasha~*~: One heck of a chapter AD. Awesome writing for this story. I love it. Your pieces are always so good and entrancing. Look forward to more.

Athenewolf:Excellant update! I love the ending of the chapter. How Spike is all someone took what is mine, course he doesn't want her, not enough to leave his sire. Now he is all high and mighty. I loved it - especially buffy standing up to him. Very very good,I love this story - it is very very good!

Oracleholly: Ariel, you are an amazing storyteller. This story is so fresh and original. I\'m hooked, and I want more soon. Such an interesting idea making \'Buffy\' Cecily and then making her a vengeance demon.

Mali: I love this!!! It\'s bloody brilliant! Please, please let Spike fall in love with Buffy again, but, lol she can be hurt and not ... return his affections, lol. Even though it\'s the opposite right now.

Pam: Please write more soon!!! can\'t wait to read more chapters. why can\'t spike be in love with buffy instead of drusilla??!!!!

Mali: Oh. I loved the last line. Woohoo! Angst!

Superstes Diligo: As always your stories are brilliant Ariel! I hope you update soon! :-) can\'t wait for the next chapter

BatdzAngel: I am enjoying this immensely! I cannot wait to see where you\'re going with this, maybe Sunnydale? That would be fabulous, I think. Updates are going to happen again soon, I hope? Kudos!

spike_spetslayer: AD, how could you do that? *whimpers* We need more! more more more!

Athenewolfe:I loved vengence... what a great way to move through time. it was truly truly fab! I cnanot wait to see where youare going with it next - it is sucha fab story.

margaret: great historical twist, i\'m glad buffy finally gets to get even with the watchers. more soon please

slayerspet: (ch20): More...more please!

slayerspet: (ch19): I hope you can update soon. I love this story.

slayerspet : (ch18): I So love this story. I didnt think I would like it when I started reading it cause I thought it was just gonna be a William/Elizabeth fic...but I love how you added the Vamp/Slayer element to it! Great job and I cant wait for more.

RedWulfe : ( chappie 18): Oh yeah the Dastardly Duo have the Immortal Wanker on the ropes and he doesnt even know it yet

zoe: ( Chapter One): Very nice! I like where this is going

jennifer/bunnyluv_pet: (chapter 17): Great update! Really enjoying this story cant wait for more

NEO : (ch 8): Such angst! Great, cant wait for more!

NEO :(ch6): Great chapter, cant wait for more!

GB : ( cahpter 1): Great start, cant wait for more updates!!!! See the watchers were always EVIL!!! Poor Buffy, poor William. But do I smell a turning coming our way?

Pam: This story is turning into be one of my favorite stories of all time. I love the fact that they had a child together. I can't wait until the story gets to present time. Is there going to be a slayer? is it going to be faith? Buffy? please keep writing this story.

Deb: Ch23: Fantastic continuation of this fic. Loving it!

daisy: ch 24: okay first of all i think this is a fantastic fic. i can't wait for the next chapter. why is spike so stupid? cant he just love the right girl and get over his sire. can't wait for more soon please. love this fic.

BatdzAngel: ch24: I so hope Spike gets hit in the head with something hard as he realizes just what he's done to Buffy all these centuries! And that Dru gets hers as well 'cause it's really annoying when she's interrupting just as they get somewhere meanginful! Enjoying this story immensely and cannot wait for the next part!

Stephanie: ch24: Excellant as always Ariel! I love this story - I feel so sorry for Buffy she loves william with all her heart and he always and forever puts Dru first. It makes me want to cry! I love your writing - it is so beutifuL!

Mari: Aww, you made me cry. I could feel Buffy's despair over having to fulfill Robin's wish that way and her resignation over her love for Spike never being returned. It was so sad. Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter, can't wait for more.

Pamela:ch24:This is one of my favorite stories. When is spike going to finally leave dru for good? I hate how spike keeps leaving buffy for her. She's not worthy of him. Please update soon!!! SusieDaSpikeSlayer: ch24: I love how you've weaved moments of Spike's history from the show into this story...its made amazing so far...keep up the awesome work!

slayerspet: ch24:Love this story...can't wait to see 30 years later

Chapter 25

daisy:okay this just keeps getting better and better. would it be too greedy to ask for more already. and yeah it looks like buffy found her family after all this time anyway. i wonder if spike knew about them being part of his family or not. mroe soon please

Daisy:oh my goodness. i was worried there for a moment that you were going to pair off liz and spike. and ewww. how did he not know. more soon please.

Chapter 26

Kiina:Hi Ariel Dawn, thank you for sharing this lovely story with the world :-) I like the idea of Buffy as a vengeance demon. But as you now put her in season 6, I sooo hope she can beat some common sense into Liz - she needs it! Can't wait to see how you develope the Buffy-Spike-Liz relationship triangle, I guess you'll stay in the season for some time?! Oh, and maybe Spike realises that he treats your Buffy in this Story how Dru always treated him? Would love to see/read it. You rock. Love Kiina :-)

Chapter 27

Stephanie: Awesome chapter as always swetie - now rn off and pack! hehheheeh

Daisy: you had me scared there for a minute when he said i wish. but you made it all okay. poor dawn. i hope liz changes her mind about buffy soon. can't wait for mroe. soon please

Slayerspet: I have been following this story for a while now and I don't always review...so I thought I would today to let ya know that I love this story and now it is really getting to the good parts. I wonder...now that Spike knows that Liz is his grandaughter, his advances on her will stop...however, with Liz not knowing who he is will she start stalking him...advance herself on him? I cant wait to find out.

Mari:Awesome chapter. I love how you're entwining your story with BtVS season 6. Loved that Buffy stuck to her decision of not giving in to Spike's advances and that he in turn seems to be making an effort to win her back. I loved Dawn/Buffy's interaction and Uncle Rory's wish, it was fun to read them all waiting with baited breath until he formulated it. Can't wait for more.

jo: Im so loving this story, and i would be extreamly grateful if it was completed, really cant wait to see what happens

~*~Tasha~*~:As posted on the Misfits tag .... ~*~Tasha~*~: NO !!! AD, you so CAN NOT leave it like that. Please please please tell me that you'll have Ch. 31 up soon. I can't handle that ending there.
~*~Tasha~*~: I"m dying here. Simply dying. Please ... just tell me what I have to do to get Ch. 31 out, and I'll do it! Please tell me it isn't what it looks like at the end of 30. I swear I will hate him for
~*~Tasha~*~: life if it is. I just couldn't handle that happening again. Not now, not after everything.
~*~Tasha~*~: I'm begging here, AD. Please don't have him do it again.

GB:30:OMG, if he so leaves again I will make a wish on him!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great update AD. I hadn't the chance to start this fic until today, I've been reading since 1 pm,lol. Love it, can't wait until u update again.

Ashley Granchester:I just started today reading this story and I was not able to leave the computer until I read the last chapter. It's a great story, even if I hate Spike for being such a toy of Druscilla's wishes, I just hope he's not going back. I'll be waiting impatienly for your next update. Thank you so much for gifting us with your stories. Ash.

Susie:It just keeps getting better...but the cliffhangers kill me lol. Keep up the good work!!

Jo: Excellent story, love your writing, please continue

redwulf50: Spike is a true genious I love his wish :P

BloodyTearsOfLife: This fic rocks my socks and I love the way it's been progressing.

Jordy: I'm sorry to not have reviewed before. This story is very original and very well done. I especially like the last little bit in ch. 34. Can't wait to see the reaction Liz has to the news of who Spike is. I'm curious to see how you'll deal with Liz learning the truth about all of it, as well as how the rest of season 7 will go. Please update soon.

redwulf50: Oh yeah *bows before your greatness* damn good chappie :P

~*~Tasha~*~: Does she still not realize that Spike is her great Grandfather? She still thinks that Spike is hers? Liz does that is? Crazy girl. I hope she figures it out from the journal. Excellent update. I look forward to more.

GB: *squee* NO YOU DIDN'T GO THERE!!!! OMG, this is toooooo great, can't wait for the next update.

Milly:35:Great to see another update. still loving this story :)

Jordy:35:Great update. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very curious to see what happens when Liz finally finds out how Spike is related to her. And how the family acting is very true. Great update, please update soon.

Milly:ch 36:fascinating. I look forward to the next installment. :)

GB:ch 36:Great update AD! Very funny when Liz finally put two and two together, think it took her long enough. Can't wait for the next update!

GB: Ch 37:Lovely update. Loved when Xander lost his mouth, it should have stayed lost,lol. Can't wait till the next update!

Milly:Living Vengence 37:Still loving this story. Its great to see Anya as vengence boss. I'm looking forward to seeing everyone in the same place together, fighting the first evil.

jane:Great update still loving this fic



maggie :I LOVED THIS STORY GREAT READ WAS A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED THAT THERE WAS NT MORE HOPE YOU ADD SOME MORE NICE LONG CHAPTERS REFRESHING TO SEE TABLES TURNED BUFFY THE ONE WAITING FOR SPIKE. GREAT READ HOPE TO READ MORE SOON THANK YOU MAGGIE

Opal: Ch 41: I love how Buffy bitch slapped Kennedy verbally. It made my night! *hugs*

Verda:ch. 44:Great rewrite! I could see Faith waving her hand when she said "kinda shaky about you" to Spike. Glad that Liz is accepting her grandparents now, makes it alot better for them all. Great update, looking forward to more.

redwulf50: 47: Does happy dance. OH freakin yeah new Living Vengence. You soooo rock. I love your take on this eppie

kim: Well, at least someone was there to stand up for Liz. She was right, and maybe she had to go in there along to get it done, but she's right about the bad guy MO. Please have she and Buffy and Dawn kick the rest out of the house, instead of Liz. Dawn didn't even have that authority in canon, since she was still a minor. That house was in Buffy's name after Joyce died...and she really shouldn't have let them take it from her. Funny addition from Anya.

Caro Mio : Those flashcards were definitely disturbing. So, how's Buffy with her Chinese?

Marzbar : Liz is still being a blockhead. I hope she wises up soon. Spike and Erixel could be a lot of help against the First Evil. More story please.

Caro Mio : Well, she and Spike got farther than they have for a long time. Poor Anya... I hope Dawn keeps in touch often. Liz is even worse than our Buffy was. At least Spike isn't in love with her anymore...eww. So, I guess when Willow goes psycho, and I hope Tara doesn't die, but anyway, Spike will be around to keep an eye on Dawn this time.

nb : History :Great story. I like how you turned the whole Cecily thing around. But somethings got me a bit wonky, if Dawn and Liz are decendents of Buffy and Spike wouldn't that make Spike and Liz's relationship some sort of insest? Anywho, love the tale and I can't wait to read the next chappy.

kim : Comings and Goings :Wow, he's 11 now. How time flies. As he gets into his teens, she's going to have to start training him to defend himself from the Immortal. Her wish that he, or his descendants, will kill the Immortal was granted, so the boy has to be prepared.

kim : Violation :Please update soon. I'm sure the Immortal has awfully wicked plans for her. Can't wait to find out who has the pendant right now.

kim : Opening Doors :Well, things get interesting now. I'm sure he'll have all kinds of comments, or at least thoughts, about what he's overhearing right now.

kim : Watchers :Ha, like that's going to happen. Anyanka's too smart for a Council trap. Oh, things will get interesting when Spike arrives. What will Buffy do?

kim : If Wishes were Vampires :These two! So frustrating. He has to know that she would take him in a heartbeat if he ever left Dru for good.

Caro Mio : Making Peace :How truly interesting. I don't think I've seen a story where Buffy was a vengeance demon before, put into William's history. I'm sure she and Anya will have lots of fun.

Signa:42:Oh my, I love this story. The way you are putting this together is wonderful. I cant wait to read further.

Signa:26: I have read this far in one night, Great story . I love the way you are connecting everyone. I will read more tomorrow.

cordykitten:57:Really the last chapter? Oh wow.. that was a long way. ~ Ah.. Liz knew all the time it seems. It was a gift for Buffy indeed. Lol and even the head did make a great gift for the right one :)) Awe :) And Buffy found a part of her family she thought dead; a part that was very helpful. Another secret solved. AWE :))) I loved the end! And enjoyed reading the story even if it was hard sometimes. Thank you!

Jenx:57: AWwwwwwwwwww!!! >_< I'm going to melt! Love love love this fic! :)

Jenx:26:Argh! Poor Buffy. It's simply anyone-but-Buffy for her. Falling in love with Liz and simply forgetting about Buffy! Ugh! I can't believe it! The things u made Buffy go through, I almost won't believe that I'll be satisfied when they eventually end up together. Spike is way beneath Buffy in this fic! But knowing that such a talented writer u r, u'll prolly spin the fic in a way that'll satisfy our Spuffy crazed people. Thanks so much for sharing this fic. Onwards I go!

Tanja:57: Oh my God! This was truly amazing! I loved reading this story SO much! There were times when I wanted to smack Spike around at the beginning when he kept hurting Buffy by returning to his Sire's side everytime they were together and it was so sad and beautiful to read about Buffy's devotion toward the only real love of her life. *Happy sigh*. Oh! And I absolutely loved what you did to Dru! Eh eh eh. Great solution to keep her out of the way without dusting her. I really hope you'll consider writing a sequel, this universe you created is just awesome! Please keep up the amazing work!

Kar:57: Terrific!!

MadBrillianT:4:i love the idea of Buffy as a vengence demon! and anyanka is one of my favorite charactors, so i was thrilled to see her interoduction here. good job!

synonumous:57: aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh soooooooooo cwute!! good job happy ending!! yipee cookies for you :)

spufette :57: Oh that was a wonderful ending.

scaryscouse:57:wow you actually finished it. I feel like I have been reading this for ever. A good read-well done

Opal :57:What a wonderful end to this fantastic tale. I'm so sad to see it over. Isabella certainly was a surprise as well. *huggles*

L:57:Awe, lovely ending. Thanks for sharing your story.

secretguest:57:This is one of my favorites! Great work!!!!

Mali:57:Oh, wow, wow, wow, wow. As the end of this epic, intelligent, captivatingly wonderful fic, this chapter is a wonderful conclusion. Haha, yay for this review being both the 300th, and the first on this chapter. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful fanfiction to read and to think about, maybe a mini-oneshot-sequel is in the future?

cordykitten:56:Good to see them back together :) Oh that's weird: Spike didn't leave the clues for Buffy? Who did it then? Surely not Drusilla and the Immortal didn't know it. Dawn? Mmm *stops guessing and reads on* Liz was out with the immortal? Yeah, not getting an invite made a bit of a problem. When they came to the club (with Dawn *g*) I was worried because it was empty. But color me surprised: Liz has killed the Immortal in the meantime. So Buffy's wish was fulfilled after all the long time :) Looking forward to the next chapter *still wondering who left the clues*

Mali:56: YES! GO LIZ!

Opal:56: *squee* what a fantastic ending...I absolutely did not think that would be the way vengeance was dished on the immortal.

cordykitten:55:Ah good, that did go well just in time; Dawn is still alive and Buffy has her pendant back. *grins* Spike was harder to win over again :) But Buffy managed to convince him. And without the pendant she is aging again? Then she'll stay the age she is now with the pendant.

akarinacj:55:Lovely chapter!!!! So nice they´re back together again. Hope we get a continuation of the spuffiness in the next chapter. He, he. Please update soon.

Mali:55:Yay! Buffy's got her pendant back and has been reunited with her family! Yay!

secretguest:55: FINALLY! They're reunited! I'm so glad! I can't wait to read more about the reunion! Update soon please!

Opal:55:Our lovers are back together again! Yeah. I like how this came about. Good job!

cordykitten:54:Oh, seems Spike is sending Buffy on a hunt. Another clue to follow. Too bad that Spike doesn't believe that she is alive when she tries to contact him. ~ And now hunting down a church? Seems almost impossible. Ah, she found it! Her pendant too because Dawn wears it now. ~ Lets hoe then that Buffy's dream won't come true!

secretguest:54: Uh oh...I hope her pendant isn't lost or broken. PLEASE don't let it break. Update soon please!

golddrake :54: great chapter

golddrake :53: great chapter

secretguest:53:I'm sooo glad she didn't go for the slayer gig. I'm glad Kennedy's stuck in another dimension. I never liked her. Update soon please!

cordykitten:53:Noël's house is full of treasure, all that pictures. Ah clever, to send a message through letting the houses get cleaned. Ah.. now everybody wants Buffy. What will she decide to do? And she hasn't gotten Spike back yet. *ggg* So Kennedy is eh on vacation? That she got from trying to stake Spike! *nods* She shouldn't have tried that. Seems Buffy has a clue now where Spike and Dawn are hiding. And more decisions to come. (I forgot: Is Buffy immortal without the pendant? Being only a slayer?) Till next part!

MyBlondieBear:52:Oh my gosh, this had got to be the best fanfiction I've read in over six months. It's well written and the charactors are really developed. Their personality spills out of them wit their actions, conversations, and other charactors opinions about them. I love this story and I cant wait for the update... Until then.

cordykitten:52:Dru is really crazy but clever too: Angel and 'dog'Nina, Spike doesn't want Dru any longer, he's Buffy's mate. She is really crazy but she also sees a lot. *phew* But at last she is solid now; one step nearer to find Spike... because being bound to W&H and a ghost didn't make things easier. I hope she'll find him soon! :)

golddrake: 52:great chapter

secretguest:52:I can't wait for them to be reunited! Update soon please!

cordykitten:51:I wondered if the connection would get to live again if Buffy came back; it did. So Spike should know for sure about it now :))) But she came back as a ghost... at last this time news gets out to the right people. But with Liz dating the Immortal they must be careful. And without her pendant she's mortal (well a slayer so a bit more then mortal). ~ At last Buffy meet a friendly face, a connection to her past (Wesley). ~ Drusilla? Looking forward to the reaction.

golddrake :51:great chapter

secretguest:51:Yay! Buffy's back! Oh no....Liz is dating the Immortal? Doesn't she know? I hope Buffy gets solid soon and contacts Spike. Update soon please!

cordykitten:50: Things get sad? Uh-huh... *reads on* It was better that Buffy told Spike of her plans instead only pushing him through the portal. Wishes are tricky... Buffy wished for seeing Spike and her pendant again. I hope this will be enough to get her through it. *sniff* It got sad, you're right.. but Buffy feeling 'trapped' gives me hope that there will be more. I forgot too if Buffy can be killed (the vengeance wish she did); that would be another sign to get her through it, coming alive again. ~ Till next chapter! *sniffs some more*

secretguest:50: Sniff...so sad. What's going to happen next? WIll they be reunited right away? Update soon please!

golddrake:50:great chapter

spufette :50:Oh, I just could not bear it if Buffy truly died now. After everything Spike and Buffy have been through? Oh, sigh.....well, it was a wonderful ride.

Mari :50:And again you made me cry. Seems to be a pattern lately. ;) Wonderful adaptation of Chosen. I loved the way you intermingled everything we watched with your story and made it even better than it was. Hope to read more of this story soon!

kim :50:Well done, Buffy. I don't realy feel sad for her, under the circumstances. It was her time to do this. Poor Spike... Good ol' Anya.

cordykitten:49:And thanks for reminding me that Liz read Buffy's story; you're right, she knows it. Ah right, I forgot about Drusilla too. She turned human through a wish... Angel is quick to deny the fact (that Drusilla lives with him / is alive). So Liz thought hard about it all... but Buffy too. For now it looks like Buffy will wear the amulet. I wonder what it will do to her. *nods* And Buffy is right; both Spike and Dawn will be pissed off if Buffy goes through with her plan to get them away. Looking forward to the next chapter...

Mari:49: You made me cry, you bad woman you. I just caught up with this story, about 15 chapters or so I was behind and I loved every word, every minute of it. This is such a wonderful story and I really can't wait to find out what you have in sotre for Buffy and Spike in the next chapters, so more please?

golddrake:49:great chapter

tis-kit:49:I'm seriously on tenter-hooks here. Great update, great story.

secretguest:49:Uh oh...is Buffy going to be wearing her pendant when she's wearing the amulet? Is she going to die? I like vengeance demon Biffy lots. I don't want her to die. Does Spike know about her plan? Hopefully she won't die. That would be HORRIBLE! She's my favorite character. Update soon please!

cordykitten:48: Keeping Dawn save is important to Buffy like it is to Liz (and Spike). But I don't like Buffy's thoughts, thinking of dying. That's why she choose Spike to stay with Dawn I think, because he wouldn't let her die if he can change it. And I don't think Liz knows the true history of Angel, what he did to Buffy's family. Looking forward to what will come next (and hoping nobody of the "Summers" family, that includes Spike, will have to die).

secretguest:48:Buffy's not going to die is she? I think I would have to cry if she died. I like the vengeance demon Buffy! She's so cool! One of my favorite versions. Update soon please!

golddrake:great chapter

cordykitten:47:I told you before but I repeat: I'm glad that the others tried to gang up Liz but that Buffy stopped it :) Grandma Buffy *g* yeah, getting the weapon was definitely more helpful for Liz :)

secretguest:47:I just love this Buffy! Update soon please!

Mali:18:Labiennemorte. The good death? I just noticed this, how could I have just noticed this?

Meagan:46:Just spent yesterday and today reading this story from chapter one and I must say....I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! It goes with the time line of the show and adds so much more to it that I wish this is what we saw on television...this is great and I can't wait for more chapters.

golddrake:46:great chapter

cordykitten:46:Hehe Buffy talked to Kennedy :-p Fun :) And she noticed that Liz seems to have already lost her fight? Not good but at last she saw and is determined to do something about it. Buffy wants to have more Summers, Underwoods and Fairchildes :) Awe, getting to take clothes from Buffy? That was an offer Dawn couldn't resist *g*. Who would with such a large collection? The meeting isn't over yet... But I'm glad for Buffy being there, telling the other to go if they don't like Liz's leadership. This house belongs to her and Dawn! :) Good chapter

secretguest:46:I never understood how she could be kicked out of her own house....even if her sister wanted her to be....it was ridiculous! I like your version MUCH better. Are all of them going to leave instead? I think they deserve to. They're not gonna hurt Buffy while Spike is gone are they? Update soon please!

Wikka Tara :45: PLEASE UPDATE!!! I love this story and I've been reading it repeatedly to the end. please update VERY soon!!!! Please and thank you!

cordykitten:45: Seems this little interaction (talk) with Faith got both jealous.. Buffy and Liz. ~ And thinks getting harder. Xander got hurt badly. And Anya still cares for him.. she did waste some time to go to the hospital. ~ Looking forward to find out what will happen next.

secretguest:45: Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Spike doesn't have to die in this version! Update soon please!

goldrake:45:great chapter

cordykitten:44: Well that was a clever try; when Buffy can't wish on herself never to have exixted just call another vengeance demon and let him do the job. And I'm glad that Anya didn't grant the wish regarding Spike too because it was done to him before. And that Anya did protect them from now on against other wishes. Spike took it rather well that Buffy told him the chip was gone; but he was more worried he could hurt inocents like Dawn or Liz). ~ And I think Robin got his lesson, hopefully he won't do something stupid again. But I wouldn't bet on it. Hehe.. loved Faith seeing double. And the chapter too (but I think that is clear *gg*)

golddrake: 44: great chapter

Opal:44: Awesome update! It will be intersting to read how the next few scenes go...and if you make Spike Mr. Flammable Save The World Vamp.

secretguest:44: I never could understand why Giles was always let off the hook. Oh well! Update soon please!

cordykitten:43: Clever of Wood..by I don't think a vengeance demon is aloud to grant such a wish... It should get into Wood's head that it was him (his wish) that cause his mother's death. But that isn't easy to accept. ~ *grins* Anya's secret wasn't so secret before, huh? ;-) Good to see Liz being so (open? understanding? really talking?) towards Buffy now. Not so bitter. ~ It would be too much to say Buffy saved Spike. At the end of the chapter that isn't clear... means: CLIFFHANGER Alert! *g* I'll wait till next chapter so see what will happen next, looking forward to.

secretguest:43: Is it bad if I think they should kill him? Oh well! Kill the bastard! Update soon please!

Opal:42:Kick ass update!!!

golddrake:42:great chapter

cordykitten:42: I wonder indeed how long it will be till Wood founds out about the secret (he knows what Spike did; but he'll discover Buffy's and Liz's secret too .. well Buffy fears that). Because Buffy is bored now.. hopefully she won't do something stupid. Well Kennedy did spell the secret. That's worth at last a bloody nose *grins* And Wood knows now but not that his wish did cause his mother's dead. ~ Till Ch. 43 :)

secretguest:42: God I've been waiting for Buffy to punch Kennedy ever since she showed up on the show. What a bitch! I also like possessive growly Spike. I wouldn't mind seeing him like that more often! I wonder if Robin is planning something. I'm pretty sure he is. Update soon please!

DayWalker :41: I absolutely lurve this story! It's fantastic! I love the whole family connection thing. I hope Liz gets that stick out of her ass and sees the family she wants is right in front of her. keep writing. i can't wait for more.

Raspy_Luv:41:Following lines, very funny: "Out on the porch, she stopped Spike and licked his ear. “She gets that from me, you know. I doubt she writes poetry at all.” Liked the rest of the chapter too.

secretguest:41: Don't do it Buffy! I don't see why you have to! Hope Spike and Buffy make it out! Update soon please!

cordykitten:41: Loved Buffy defending Spike.. and more telling Kennedy some much needed words. But Kennedy talks too much.. Robin knows now how Buffy is. Oops and now Buffy remembers him and how it went wrong. Maybe it's time to tell him. And Buffy has a decision to make, being the slayer instead of a vengeance demon? Mmmm thinks won't get boring! Till next time! :-D (And loved the chapter.)

Opal:40: mmm...funnel cake...mmm good upate! :)

SpaceLord :40: Oh this should be fun. Wood vs. Spike, ultimate death match :)

golddrake :40:Great chapter. The whole Wood thing is gonna get pretty ugly, isn't it? Love all your stories. Thanks

cordykitten:40: Mmm taking the amulet off would make Buffy vulnerable indeed. Bad times for that. Mmm Robin Wood. Too bad Buffy doesn't remember at the moment. And he asked a lot of questions indeed. He noticed something being off. And he did recognize Spike anyway ~ looking forward to the next chapter :)

kim :40:Imminent confrontation coming up. Nice save, Buffy. ....

secretguest:40:So...did Spike kill his mom in this fic or was it Buffy this time? I have a feeling Robin's gonna be trouble! Update soon!

Jessica :39: Oh no! She isn't going to have to grant a wish for Wood against Spike is she?! I hope not. That would pretty much suck. Can't wait for more. Especially looking forward to Buffy and Spike helping to train the potentials. Should be fun. ; )

cordykitten:39: *grins* Anya is there to annoy Xander? She'll be probably successful with it. Loved Buffy and Spike thinking Andrew had to ask their permission to court Dawn. *grins* I don't think Andrew will ask them for permission. (He doesn't know yet they are related, right?) ~ And both, Buffy and Spike, have no clue yet who Wood really is. ~ Till next part! PS: Because I will miss some updates (new stories) I joined your Yahoo Group too.

Jessica :38:Ahh the flash cards. Those were fun. I think that the chip thing is going to back fire. Spike is going to be mad. But I have some hope that Liz and Dawn won't really care. Can't wait for more.

kim :38: Funny....

secretgeuest:38: I hope Buffy's wish doesn't backfire on her! It would be a VERY SAD thing if Spike was mad at her and caused her even more pain than he has in the past! Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cas :38: Yeah for the update! And now I know exactly where we are in the series too! Good job!

cordykitten:38: Oh my.. now the chip is malfunctioning and Spike don't want Buffy to take it out *hopes she can change his mind* Oh.. Buffy didn't ask. How will take Buffy's decision? Well, we'll see. See too how the date or non-date with Wood went.

cordykitten :37: Oops.. I missed to read a chapter! ~ Phew! I forgot about this. In the original story Hallie did die. I'm glad the curse prevented Buffy from dying. And now Anya is her boss. ~ I wonder if Spike is right and working with Liz will change Buffy too (like it did change him to the good side). Oh.. all the SIT. I wonder if Buffy will be there too (if Spike wants it, she will).

kim:37: Ah, just the excuse Spike was looking for.... And Anya the new demon in charge....wow. I like how you altered that to save Buffy, since it definitely couldn't go like it had on the show.

secretguest :37: I like the way Buffy is just fine! I don't think she needs to become a good-doer! Great chapter! I glad Liz is more accepting now!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

Jessica :37: Ooh! Lovely chapter. Liz asking Buffy for something was great. You just know that she's gonna cave. I'm glad that Anya got some vengeance in for what Xander did to her. I was grinning when Giles said "I wish." The no mouth thing was hilarious. ; ) To bad she undid it. Can't wait for more.

spufette :37: I hate to say it, but better D'Hoffryn then Buffy! Great chapter and I'm glad Liz is finally coming around.

Jessica:36:The thing with the First doesn't sound good. I wonder where you are going with it. As always, I loved the chapter. Can't wait for more.

cordykitten:36: Wow.. icky feeling indeed that you're lusting after you're grandpa (who looks only a bit older than you). At last the diary opened Liz's eyes. Now the cards are laid open.. The First Evil will arrive. ~ Till next time!

Mari :36: Heh, yes, Liz's reaction was quite funny. I just love your Dawn, she's much much better than in the series. And I can't wait to see how you're going to incorporate the First Evil's storyline to your story. Wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more.

kim :36:Hmmm....how will they kill the First this time?

spufette :36:so glad Spike finally reliazes where his true loyalties lie! I love this Spike now.

Jessica:35:I loved this chapter. Hopefully Liz will see that she is not as alone as she thinks she is. Buffy has been a slayer so she knows how that feels. And Liz is going to get a family again. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling that this is where she will find out that Spike is her grandfather. ; ) Looking forward to it.

spufette:35:Uh, Liz, here's a dollar, get a clue. Buffy is your Great-great-great (whatever) grandmother and yes, Spike is your Great-great-great (whatever) grandfather. This girl needs a lesson in geneology! Besides, even Dawn has caught on for God's sake! I can't wait until Liz reads the final chapters of Buffy's diary and sees the truth right before her eyes. As for Spike, well, he always did leap before he looked and I can't feel too sorry for him at any time. I hope Drusilla comes back and Buffy or Liz stakes the bitch! Yeah! Great chapter! spuf

cordykitten:35: Wow .. Liz choose to read on and let Dawn enjoy her time with Spike and Buffy. Thrilling written story, huh? No kidding, Liz is drawn in the story of the diary; engrossed. I didn't remember the word. I loved reading the story in the story. They acted like a family, looked like a family and Liz kinda wanted to be part of that. Good to hear that. Looking eagerly forward to more :)

Mari:35: Awww! I'm loving the way the story is evolving. I think Buffy givng Liz her diary to read was such a wonderful idea and I'm adoring to read her take on all that happened in the past and Liz's reaction to what she's reading. Can't wait for more!

kim:35:Oh, things are about to get interesting for Liz...bitch. She could at least say thank you for the food. Joyce would be so ashamed by her daughters behavior.

akarinacj:35:This was one of the best chapters of them all, really. Can´t wait to read the conclusion of Liz´s reading the journal.!!!!!! Please update soon.

Jessica:34: Very interesting that Buffy gave Liz her journal to read. And it really is quite funny that now Liz thinks that Spike is hers. Squicky 'cause here he is her grandfather, but still kinda funny. Wonder what you are gonna do with the First since you brought it up. Can't wait for more.

cordykitten:34: Back in Sunnydale :) At last Dawn is glad that they are back. Liz is only jealous. I wonder if reading the journal will change things. Sorry, to tired to write more.

SpaceLord:34:This is kinda freaky....it's like Buffy vs. Buffy for Spikes affection. Love the story so far.

blondiebear:34:can i just say....ewww!! liz is still lusting after spike and he's related to her. gross!!! lol. not to mention pathetic. now liz wants him cuz he's with someone else. loved it though. can't wait til spike and buffy tell liz off....they are gonna tell her off....right?? i mean, i know their all family and all but liz deserves to be put in her place. great job. please post soon.

Mali:34:Oh, I'm ignorant, I didn't notice this line. Spike fumbled for a cigarette as he knew that soon Liz would know. Know who he was and just how icky it made him feel. That was why he needed a fag. Goodie goodie, that makes me very, very happy for some reason that Liz will find out. I'm evil. Wonderful chapter, once more.

secretguest:34:Great chapter! Is Liz gonna do something to Erixel? I can't wait to read more! Update soon please!!!!!!!!

Mali:34: Oh dear, the second to the last three sentences slightly disturb me. Liz's got some scary things in her head, and I really hope she reads all that journal quick. Incidentally, is there anything about Erixel's life post elevation?

kim:34:Eeeeewwwww, she can't want him! They're related!! She exists because of Spike. Wow, Liz is even more dense than our Buffy. That's saying a lot. LOL

Jessica:33: I'm glad that he finally realized that. Its about time. Loved the chapter. I was a bit worried when Buffy had to go find him. But it worked out well. I wonder how the Dru situation is going to work out. And I'm still waiting for Buffy to meet Giles and Wesley. Still adore this story. Can't wait for more.

GoldenBuffy:33:*sniff* Great update AD! *sniff*

spufette: 33: Gee, it's about fu**ing time Spike! Finally! You get the real woman! I'm glad Spike has finally come around and Buffy forgave him. (Can't blame the girl for being a bit pissy about everything!) spuf

cordykitten:33:Oh my.. Spike made the wish but now.. calling Buffy Erixel? Not good. I hope Angel won't Dru turn again, trying to make her better. We'll see. ~ Buffy 'hunted' her vampire. :) Yet... *sigh* He thinks he lost so much? Hope the journey down the memory lane helps. ~ I'm glad it did. He noticed at last that Buffy was there, all the time. ~ Good chapter.

kim:33: Awww, good ending to the chapter. Hmm, me thinks Spike has a plan.

cordykitten:32:Awe, hot chocolate. It won't make everything better, but it will soothe the hurt a bit. *sigh* Dawn is fun :) "gold digger" *gg* And Anya joining their meal. Drusilla is coming? Yeah, that confrontation is long overdue. Ain't I'm loving this line? *gg* "And William is mine. Started out that way, I think your borrowing period is long over." :) Dru got Spike in a bad situation, what a dilemma. Phew! Spike had a plan, and a good one! That was a clever wish, very clever! :)

MARGARET:32:OHH, I LIKE THIS TWIST! MAYBE NOW DRU CAN GET WHAT SHE DESERVES!

Jessica:32:I'm very happy to see that Dru wasn't able to hurt them again. Can't wait to see what the new Dru is like. More please.

kim:32: Hey, good plan, Spike! Wow...Dru, human...she's going to be mad as a March hare.

Opal:32:Ariel...that ending rocks!! great job!!

bellefleur29:32:oh that was really great! I didn't expect that route. Thanks for the update.

maryperk :32:OH AD what a cliffy!!!!! love it!!!!

kim:31:Ah...a crisis makes friends out of enemies. Wow, even Liz can think of Dawn's welfare first.....and Willow would go after Dawn while she's on her power trip. Uh, is Spike covered? "cause Dawn's going to get quite an eyeful when they go back to the apartment.

Jessica:31:Was it just me or did Liz and Xander not really care that Tara was dead? Loved the chapter. You had me so worried about the Dru thing. Can't wait for more.

cordykitten:31: Chapter summary? I feared it... *reads on* *Phew* He made her cry withouth reason, he stays with her *relieved* That's good for a change. And Dawn is totally supporting Spike's new/old relationship. I'm glad. Oh neat.. if Dawn calls, Buffy will come for her. Even in her nightgown *gg* ~ Awe, poor Tara. She got killed in this story too. Wow.. I had never thought Liz would Dawn send away with Buffy. ~ Looking forward to the next chapter!

akarinacj :31:I love this fic. Great update. As usual.

Faith:30: OMG PLEASE UPDATE NOW

secretguest:30: YEAH!!!! They're together now!!!!!! I hope it works out well for them, but why is he so sad now? He should be happy now! I can't wait to see what you'll have next. Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cordykitten:30:Oh I see the twist coming: Together they would be a homing beacon for the Immortal. She wasn't leaving him, so he had to come with her. That's just the way it was going to have to be. But what will Spike think? Will he leave Liz?.. And here I thought the angst was over. Now I'm worried again. At last Spike did some thinking lately what he did to Buffy. I wonder if it will prevent him of hurting her again. I'm not sure. -> points to Buffy waking up alone and Spike looking sad *sigh* 120 years... BTW.. this is the second chapter where I can't make the letters better. I was able to do it with the previous chapters *pouts*

jenny:30: i swear to god! if he leaves her again I'M going to cut his dick off, even if he is spike! update soon!!!

Jessica :30:I had forgotten about the cameras. Loved the chapter, up until that last part. He said that he was done with Dru. Surely he is not stupid enough to piss off his new vengenance demon wife in Arashmahar with all of her demon freinds nearby. Ooh, he wants to go to her one last time and kill her. Maybe? More please.

kim :30:Sad look! No, not again....Please don't tell me he's leaving again! Please update right away!

Mali :30: Uh-oh. That spells trouble, can't wait for the next, but please put in some fluff to make up for whatever angst is coming!

Opal :29: Yeah!!!! All with the lovey dovey now. :) Great update AD! :) *hugs*

Mali :29:Gooey marshmallows. That was oh so sweet, I'm so happy for them. Can't wait to see the others' responses.

kim :29:Yay...finally a claim!!! Can't wait for the Immortal's ass to finally be kicked.

Jessica:29:Squee! Amazing chapter. I have been waiting for that for a long time. Love this story. Please update again soon.

cordykitten:29: I'm glad you could update even it is the angsty story :) Seems as if Spike is really changing. Well he's slow, taking a 100 years time. ~ I'm glad that Buffy was able to visit Dawn too when visiting Anyanka. Look there: Spike claimed her to prove her something (that he would never go back to Dru). Never thought he would do it, so Dru-whipped he was all the time. Loved the chapter :)

Mari:29:Awww, I'm so glad he claimed her. :D And that she accepted. I'm also happy that Spike now realizes how much he's hurt Buffy and wants to make ammends. Can't wait for more!

spufette:29:Well, it's about damned time!!! Yeah! I just hope they both pull their respective heads out and live eternity some kind of happiness together!

Jessica:28:Poor things. And I kinda want the Immortal to meet them. It seems that one of them would be the one to finally kill him. Loved it. More please.

Mali:28:Heh heh. Am I right to assume by the last few sentences that Spike returned to Aramanshar with Buffy?

cordykitten:28:I didn't expect you to post here so soon another chapter but you're very welcome :) *sigh* D'Hoffryn is right I fear.. they'll be in danger.... all because of that Immortal. Too bad they have to part again. Dawn loves her a lot... and I'm sorry for Spike and Buffy. Now for one time it isn't Spike that is leaving he would stay with her. But for the save of the children *sigh* We'll see how it goes. Thanks for the update :)

Mari:28: Oh, poor Anya and poor Buffy and Dawn. It must have been very difficult for Buffy to separate from Dawn, hope they can keep in touch. I really don't like Liz and I like her less with each passing chapter. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen now that Buffy will have to go to protect Liz and Dawn from the Immortal and what will happen with Buffy and Spike. More, please?

daisy:28:poor dawn and buffy, just when they found each other. can't wait to see what you decide to do next. more soon please

Valery:28:Good chapter but please I don`t want Spike sleeping with Anya for solace

ChrissieLinnit:28:I feel so sad. First for Dawn, because she has just found family who love her so much and she has to be parted from then. Then I'm sorry for Liz. She's just like early canon Buffy, pissed at her calling, frightened by all the responsibility she has now that her mum's gone, too wired to be able to give her sister any real attention, confused by Spike's attentions, and shocked and angry with Buffy for revealing their connection which forces her to look at demons in something other than black and white... poor kid. I'm also sorry for Anya and Xander. I had hoped that this wedding might have gone differently from canon, but ho hum... And... I'm sad for me and Buffy, because I really don't think that this Spike ever did or ever will really love Buffy above all others. William loved her the way canon William loved Cecily - a naiive, dreamt of love but not real. Spike craved his dark princess and believed that what they had was real love, and then along came Liz and his whole understanding of love turned upside down and now he's obsessed with her, but he now knows they're related so he can't have her. Just because he knows that doesn't automatically turn off feelings, but instead... the way I read it, he's cutting his losses, somewhere inside he recognises that whatever Liz has that attracts him must have come from Buffy, so if he can't have Liz, Dru no longer wants him, then he might as well secure Buffy. He knows she loves him passionately and he knows he can wear her down. Buffy's just sent Dawn back to Spike's crypt. Now Spike will make his move. Buffy's resolve will falter. Spike will press her and she'll have to agree to whatever he presses for because he's got to get back for Dawn... Buffy will then be back to being Love's Bitch... OMG how I want to bitch slap Spike right now. Anyone tell me how to bitch slap, huh? Frustrating, but perversely welcomed update.

maryperk :28: Good chappy.

cordykitten:27:Old habits indeed *sigh* I wonder what it will take Spike to decide he wants Buffy and only her... that sounds wrong, better: what it will take Spike see that Buffy is the one he needs. I understand why Buffy fled. This roller coaster... This time you won’t get your heart broken, love.. Maybe it will get better now but Spike has indeed to show her, to prove her. ~ Dawn is clever, she figured things out (great great great grandfather) :) But Liz can't stand Dawn being friendly with Buffy, or her being friendly *sigh* Loved Uncle Rory's wish :)

Jessica :27:Loved Buffy's rant to herself about how she was trying to get her self-respect back. I'm very glad to see that Buffy and Spike are going to be dates for the wedding. Looking forward to how that turns out. Loved Uncle Rory's wish also, and how it was granted multiple times. Can't wait for more.

maryperk:27:Two thumbs up.

Raspy_Luv 2006.02.09 - 09:07PM 27: Old Habits Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=111046"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=111046"] That wish was funny. I can picture it playing out, all the vengeance demons granting the wish...hehee. This is such an entertaining story. I hope it goes on for a good long while. :) Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=1175" 2006.01.28 - 02:19AM 26: History Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=107010"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=107010"] oh come one!! Spike that's so gross his GREAT GREAT GREAT granddaughter come on man he must feel really nasty right now thank god it was just kissing i feel bad for Buffy though she's in love with him and he's in love with liz that really sucks for them and what are they gonna have now druken sex well you know what they say the best sex is drunken lol anyways great chapter can't wait for more =) Author's Response: Thanks for your review. yes it is icky! Raspy_Luv 2006.01.27 - 07:13PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106941"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106941"] Yeh, Spike is a total ass for not looking up Buffy. Does he not love her? I guess not. Um, ew. Snogging his GGG Grand-Daughter and not realizing it. He's really dumb. Vamp smelling, hellloooo. Author's Response: Let's just say he's oblivious vamp sometimes Cas 2006.01.27 - 06:45PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106932"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106932"] Not really how I imagined this going, but I like it. Author's Response: Thanks! Jessica 2006.01.27 - 06:31PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106927"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106927"] Loved the chapter. Wonder if she is going to meet Giles and Wesley. And I can't wait for everyone to find out who Spike is. I hope that they actually stay together after the drunken sex. Please update again soon. Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Jess 2006.01.27 - 03:13PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106864"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106864"] I hope Spike wises up soon. Good story, please update! Author's Response: Thanks! desertrose 2006.01.27 - 02:08PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106854"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106854"] Ohmigawd! And a boot to the head for Spike. How damn dumb could he be. 120+ years of devotion from Buffy and still, NOTHING!?! Hello! And really after being around another slayer for five years he still won't let up on Buffy for what happened all those years ago. This Spike seems to be love's bitch cause thats all he chooses. Funny how we can all hate and rage at Liz when in actuality its season six's Buffy yet we can still cheer Buffy on. Good luck Dawnie. Poor kid. Author's Response: Thanks for Reading! kim 2006.01.27 - 01:07PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106843"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106843"] Ooo, good stuff. Ahh, Liz (our Buffy) still a bitch...I really wouldn't say all Vengeance Demons are evil. Nor are they soulless, if you can believe D'Hoffryn. Sticking to the Council programming is just not logical, and she'd see that if she wasn't so afraid to think for herself all the time. Good thing Spike found out about her true lineage. He's going to want to spend the next 5 years washing his mouth out with soap for kissing her. LOL They're getting drunk...which means shagging, again! Author's Response: Well, maybe! maryperk 2006.01.27 - 12:02PM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106824"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106824"] Oh thank god, just a kiss or two, but still... BLERGH(Buffy's yuck face complete with shudders and shakes). Author's Response: lol ChrissieLinnit 2006.01.27 - 11:41AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106817"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106817"] He fell in love with the Slayer?!!! Ariel, phuleeeease!!! Don't keep doing this to me... and Buffy. For goodness sake, put her out of her misery... let her fall in love with Angel, then tell Spike to put that in his pipe and smoke it! My Spuffy love is all worn out here... put me out of my misery, pet. Please? Author's Response: The misery will be over soon! cordykitten 2006.01.27 - 11:40AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106816"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106816"] I'm glad that Dru seems to be out of the game. But Spike is in love with Liz now? *sigh* ... Seems he changed his mind after getting to know that she is his offspring. *hopes* Ah right: if Dawn would change her name she would become a target... *sigh again* Poor Buffy: She is in love with Spike but Spike doesn't love her enough to stay. And her family doesn't want her because she is a demon (well Liz doesn't). Good chapter yet a bit sad as it is often. Author's Response: Sorry it's so sad! It'll get better! Mari 2006.01.27 - 11:33AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106815"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106815"] Oh, poor Buffy. I feel so bad for her right now. I hope Liz reconsiders and lets her be part of their life. Can't wait for more!. Author's Response: Thanks! Mali 2006.01.27 - 11:32AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106814"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106814"] I agree with Spufette, (just my meager opinion XD) I think Liz should be told just who Spike is. Though I get that the Spuffiness (with the rightful uffy part) isn't going to come easy, I'm dying for a crumb here! XD Author's Response: hehe, well I'm glad you keep reading! spuffette 2006.01.27 - 10:59AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106796"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106796"] Well, I'm not happy about Spikehaving 'those' feelings for Liz. However, I have a feeling he was more interested in 'who' the present slayer looked exactly like, not her so much. Okay, I liked the chapter, really. The thing is, I don't like Liz and I think she should be told exactly 'who' Spike really is. Just me being prudish. Anyway, I'm so glad you updated! spuf Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry she'll be told eventually Opal 2006.01.27 - 10:11AM 26: History Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=106786"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=106786"] I love the update! :) Author's Response: Thanks! Jessica 2006.01.22 - 03:01AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104936"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104936"] Oh God! I can't believe you left it there. Please please update soon. Author's Response: lol, I'll update soon! cordykitten 2006.01.21 - 06:40PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104811"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104811"] Ah the Anya/Xander thing.. marriage to see soon. :) If Xander doesn't run. Clever! So Liz is the Buffy from BtVS. Wonder if Spike did help Liz here.. because of Dawn? And being related to Liz too? I hope it was nothing more... He is her great great great grandfather. Till next time! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! jenny 2006.01.21 - 02:22AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104609"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104609"] wow, oh holy cow i can safely say that i was not expected that!!! i really hope that spike and liz aren't an item as that would make him her great great great grandfather? update soon? i am dying to read more!!! Author's Response: Glad you like! Raspy_Luv 2006.01.21 - 12:44AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104563"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104563"] AWESOME! I did get suspicious when she felt Dawn was familiar (last name Summers, duh), but I didn't know you were going to put another in Buffy's future place. Great! How did Spike get beaten? Was it Liz? Please tell me Spike knew and that he doesn't have a groiny yearning for his great, great, great grand daughter! Love the update! Author's Response: Glad you like, things will be revealed in the next chapter Mari 2006.01.20 - 07:17PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104464"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104464"] Oh, wow! I never would have guessed this was going to happen. Can't wait to read more of this intriguing new twist. Author's Response: Thanks! katj 2006.01.20 - 04:58PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104434"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104434"] Yay! I love it! This story is told wonderfully, the details are fantastic, the angst level is perfect. I love it when Buffy and Spike are together, but the story's still great when they're not. :) Author's Response: Thanks you so much! briana 2006.01.20 - 04:04PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104403"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104403"] omg!!! that was so good!!! I wasn't expecting that!!! well i sorta did but I would have gone with somehting like she comes to sunnyD and takes off her pendent loses her memory and become the slayer again.. only with spike's help can she retain them... but that was awesome what u did to the story!! and i liek urs better than what i wouold have done, if this masterpeice was mine in the first place. keep going!! luv it!! Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=1175" 2006.01.20 - 02:53PM 25: Family Ties Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104354"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104354"] Let me tell you i've been recently reading your story and I'm loving every mintue of it and wow this chapter completely wasn't expecting that..anyway can't wait till the next chapter .. Author's Response: Thanks! Mali 2006.01.20 - 12:18PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104290"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104290"] I just remembered that Liz is related to Spike, so it's unlikely that he's doing it with her. Right? And he's apart from Dru, and still didn't look Buffy up? Ooh. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Mali 2006.01.20 - 12:17PM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104289"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104289"] NO! Spike fell in love with Liz? *breaks down* This will destroy Buffy. Could you please tell me if this is going to be Spike/Liz or Spuffy? Wow, here was an unexpected twist. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! kim 2006.01.20 - 11:52AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104288"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104288"] Let me guess - they look almost exactly alike. Is Spike all into her, too? I was wondering how you were going to incorporate the recent years. If Spike's in love with the Slayer, and she's a descendant, that's just really eww. I mean, it's a fairly distant relation now, but still! If everything else is the same, then he's finally not with Dru, and yet he still doesn't look Buffy up? He knows Anya would know where to contact her, if he didn't want to summon her. These two really have to stop waiting 30 years! Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: So glad you are still with this fic, I know it's been a long road getting to this point! Kar 2006.01.20 - 11:02AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104278"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104278"] Juicy! Author's Response: Thanks! ChrissieLinnit 2006.01.20 - 10:55AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104274"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104274"] Huh....? OMG, I do hope that Spike hasn't been doing the beast with two backs with Anne... I'll be sick... Please, Ariel... Author's Response: stuff will be revealed in the next chapter! maryperk 2006.01.20 - 10:48AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104272"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104272"] Interesting. Cant wait for the next chappy to see if Spike's having sex with his great great great granddaughter. Author's Response: lol...now would I do that? blondiebear 2006.01.20 - 10:44AM 25: Family Ties Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=104271"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=104271"] OH MY GOD!!!!!! I knew something like this was going to happen. does this mean that liz and sike have been sleeping together right? ewwwww. i mean......you'd think after dru left him, he'd head back to buuffy but he stayed with liz!!!! why?????? you have got to post like now. I'm dying to know what happens next. great job. Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter thanks for reading! Jessica 2006.01.18 - 02:14AM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=103519"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=103519"] I don't think I like it when Buffy is resigned like that. Very sad. Please update again soon. Author's Response: Updates are coming! kim 2006.01.16 - 04:12AM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102905"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102905"] Such a sad life she leads. So lonely. Poor Robin. That's not what he meant with the wish. Poor little guy just wanted his mom to be there. Author's Response: Yep, poor Robin. Thanks for the review jenny 2006.01.16 - 03:35AM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102892"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102892"] does buffy ever turn back into a slayer? i am loving where your story is going and i can't wait to read more of it!! please update soon! i am dying to know what happens next with the spuffy! Author's Response: I'm not giving that kind of plot info away! LOL, you'll just have to keep reading. Opal 2006.01.15 - 07:17PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102764"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102764"] So sad... :( Author's Response: I know! briana 2006.01.15 - 06:58PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102761"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102761"] no!!! i want to keep reading!!! i need more chapters!! update soon please!! fukin great ass story! Author's Response: Thanks! ChrissieLinnit 2006.01.15 - 04:18PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102657"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102657"] That was beast not east... doh! Author's Response: lol ChrissieLinnit 2006.01.15 - 04:17PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102650"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102650"] Why, oh why, oh why do I keep reading this? I know it's an enticing and well written fic, but it's torturous, it debases Buffy and it makes Spike an uncaring and selfish east. Yet I return every... single... update. I beg, every... single... update... and I'm pretty sure, it tickles your muse, doesn't it Ariel? *pouts and stomps foot* Author's Response: I'm sorry!...uh actually no I'm not, but I swear it's a journey that my muse made me take them on, and it will get better, cause happy ending! "viewuser.php?uid=1801" 2006.01.15 - 04:09PM 24: A Special Little Boy Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102626"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102626"] I so want Dru to dust but I want Spike to realize he doesn't need her before she does. This is so darn good! Author's Response: Thank You! blondiebear 2006.01.15 - 03:27PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102607"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102607"] I've been reading this story for a while but I don't think I've ever left a review. I'm so sorry abou that. It's really good. I can't believe Spike is being this way. everytime they shag and he leaves, i just wanna bash him over his head. he can't have it both ways and it kills me to see buffy so weak when it comes to him but that's love right? lol. loved it lots. please post soon. Author's Response: Thanks! cordykitten 2006.01.15 - 03:07PM 24: A Special Little Boy Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=102598"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=102598"] Robin has no good life. Everyone (well, it seems only his mother) cares but yet.. Oh Spike hired the M’Fashnik as it seems. Oh my.. Robin wished for his mother’s mission to be over? That’s the thing with wishes: Be careful what you wish for. Now hw wished for his mother’s death. It took Buffy hard; being together with Spike for a short amount of time too *sigh*. She must love him very much to let him do it to her. She’s very strong. A less stronger person would have given up by now. Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! Jessica 2006.01.08 - 01:17PM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100524"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100524"] I absolutely loved the love's bitch curse. I can't believe that he said that and didn't even realize how cruel that statement was. And I can't wait to see what she can get out of Robin. Great chapters. Please update soon. Author's Response: Glad You like! Opal 2006.01.07 - 08:18PM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100409"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100409"] NEED MORE NOW!!! This story is like a frickin' drug AD!!! I'm going through withdrawals! Author's Response: Oh no! Opal's addicted! lol. I'm really glad you like it though! *hugs* jenny 2006.01.07 - 03:57AM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100131"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100131"] i can't wait to read more of your story i am dying to read more!!! pretty please with a spike on bottom update soon?? Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! "viewuser.php?uid=1243" 2006.01.06 - 10:21PM 23: Family Togetherness Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100048"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100048"] That was a great update. Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2006.01.06 - 08:29PM 23: Family Togetherness Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100027"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100027"] They come together and things just go all to hell. I just hope that they can "one day" get it together. Author's Response: One day they will Raspy_Luv 2006.01.06 - 08:06PM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=100023"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=100023"] Awww, you can't do that to us! GAH! Now it's getting REALLY interesting. It is all coming together. Can't wait till present day when she meets, the gang (and no doubt Kendra and Faith the Vampire Slayers)! Great update, although I am truly sick of Spike's devotion to Dru. It will be interesting to see how you handle their separation. Will it be Dru leaving Spike for a Chaos demon as per the show, or will Spike actually tire of her shit and willingly stay with Buffy? I'm hoping for the later, but not without a huge dose of his own medicine. I'm voting for Buffy to have sexual relations an feelings for another. The boat is temporarily out to sea. Just had a thought (I'm a little slow, others probably thought of this immediately). If Buffy grants Robin's wish, will she do so in the dark of who she is wreaking vengeance upon? Author's Response: In the dark...no, but there will be consequences! kim 2006.01.06 - 01:29PM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=99883"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=99883"] She's going to grant a wish to Robin?! Oh, boy! Man, Spike really doesn't speak before thinking. That was an awful thing to say in front of Buffy, knowing how she feels. He certainly could have been a bit more diplomatic, since he'd just shagged the woman. Loved her wish, by the way. Too perfect. I hope she finds her family. Author's Response: Yes Spike tends to do that. Yes she grants a wish to Robin Wood, and Yes she will find her family eventually. Thanks for the review! Mari 2006.01.06 - 11:50AM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=99849"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=99849"] Oh wow! That was some trip in time you just took us in. The part with Christopher was very nice, I loved the emotion that the characters showed in it. And I can't wait to find out what wish is the little boy going to make as I'm sure it will have a big impact in what's going to happen in the future. Author's Response: oh it will! Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2006.01.06 - 11:47AM 23: Family Togetherness Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=99847"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=99847"] No fun chapter to read today... ;-) Uh-huh! Spike wasn't lying! He did indeed visit his family! Noë (Noë) (Noel in case you can't read this I don't know which code works) did recognize him! And the not needed invitation was a sign too. :) He (Chris) knew that even if this time they didn’t end up together, they would someday. Yeah.. hopefully. But “She has nothing to be jealous of...” Spike is a thoughtless idiot. Sorry, but it fits. He didn't notice that he hurt her deeply. Maybe he should have told what he meant with it. Yeah... all the humans die. And Noë (Noë) in the bombing? What a waste. I'm not sure if I think that things are even.. but maybe they are: Spike wasn't at his son deathbed. He didn't know, but Buffy was there. And Buffy wasn't at Noë (Noë) funeral, but Spike was. She didn't know of it. Yet the chapter ended at a happy sight.. (the little little African American boy with the watcher). Author's Response: Thanks for the review! spuffette 2006.01.06 - 11:19AM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=99843"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=99843"] Hehehe, clever the way you threw that wish by Buffy in there! I can't wait to see Spike tortured emotionally for all of his past sins. First off, I don't buy his sire thing; if he was strong enough to walk away from Buffy? He could walk away from Drusilla, if he wanted to that is. I have a feeling that the little boy is Robin Wood, right? Cool twist! Great chapter, spuf Author's Response: Yes the little boy is Robin Wood. I hope you like the other twists I have in mind for you! Kar 2006.01.06 - 10:35AM 23: Family Togetherness Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=99839"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=99839"] The twists and turns are just adding up... I love it! So original! Author's Response: Thank you! Mari 2005.12.29 - 11:00PM 22: Bombs and Vampires Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97832"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97832"] Oh, poor Buffy, she seems to be resigned to the fact that Spike will always go back to Dru. I loved this chapter, it was nice to read that Spike did care about his son enough to seek him out and one thing that I've always liked of your Buffy, no matter what happens or how much it could potentially hurt her, she's been very straightforward with Spike. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm glad you like her! ChrissieLinnit 2005.12.29 - 03:54PM 22: Bombs and Vampires Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97722"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97722"] She didn’t care that she knew he would go back to Dru, ‘cause he always did that. She wanted this, she wanted to feel him, be with him, even just for a night. Once every sixty or so years was ok right? How dreadfully sad is that. For years all Spike lovers have hated the fact that Dru and Buffy made him Love's Bitch... and now, in this story, Spike gets his revenge and makes Buffy Love's Bitch. Poor, poor girl. She never wanted to be a Vengeance Demon, she just wanted his love. And, even when they come together after 60 years she realises just what it means, "... if I’m going to get my heart broken tomorrow, I’m gonna need a lot of good sex to tide me over.” *turns sad tear-filled eyes to Ariel... in silent plea for her to end this misery* Author's Response: Umm, the misery continues for a few more chapters...sorry Cas 2005.12.29 - 03:24PM 22: Bombs and Vampires Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97700"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97700"] Still loving it. I imagine if you are following cannon at all that Spike will get back with Dru again, but I love these stolen moments when they are together. Author's Response: Yes I am following cannon to a certain extent, I'm glad you like! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.29 - 03:17PM 22: Bombs and Vampires Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97699"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97699"] First the sad/angsty one. Then I'll read WaM. So when this is too sad I have something happier to end with. Even when it's the last chapter of WaM. I'm glad that Buffy didn't blow Spike up (Spike didn't get blow up). And for Christopher's sake I'm glad Spike did see him. Bad enough he had only his mother most of the time. And she was busy too. Good too that Spike didn't claim Dru. So Darla was lying, huh? Only intending to hurt Buffy. I liked the way it ended, your chapter. Yet I fear that Spike will leave her again *sigh* No signs yet that it is getting better. Author's Response: But it will, eventually, I can't stand non happy endings, so I certainly won't write a non happy ending! lol Raspy_Luv 2005.12.27 - 06:02PM 21: Blow Me... Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97269"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97269"] I'm following this story but I still hate this Spike. He is such an ass. Anxious to see how and if you redeem him. Author's Response: I will redeem him, slowly. It's going to take a while! Jessica 2005.12.26 - 11:55PM 21: Blow Me... Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=97043"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=97043"] LOL! Loved the chapter. I really want to find out what happens next. Please update very soon. Author's Response: Thanks! ChrissieLinnit 2005.12.25 - 05:02PM 21: Blow Me... Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=96812"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=96812"] Just... just... keep him away from me, OK? First time in forty plus years he sees the 'supposed' love of his life, the mother of his child, he's pissing vinegar. He seems to have no sense of how his actions and life with Dru have hurt Buffy, and enven more, he thinks he can just turn on the sickly charm and everything'll be all right. *GAAARGHHH* "ANYANKAAAAAA!!!!! I wish...." Thank you for the Christmas update, pet. Hope your day was good and the rest of your Christmas season inspires your Muse to give Spike permanent blue ball and floppy penis and Dru a terminal case of splinters in the chest area... Or, mayhap your Muse might perform miracles and persuade me Spike is worthy of a second chance? Author's Response: Well I hope that I'll be able to redeem him eventually. It is going to be a slow process. But I'm glad you haven't given up on my fic yet. Happy Holidays! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.25 - 03:20PM 21: Blow Me... Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=96802"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=96802"] Huh? Spike is mated? I don't imaging him falling so deep for Dru because she keeps betraying him. Did he really visit his son? And what about the blowing up a vampire? I hope you can update soon :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Jessica 2005.12.15 - 02:43AM 20: Rebellions and Wars Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=95020"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=95020"] Wow! Loved the chapters. I wanted to smack Dru for the China thing though. And Spike too for not even trying to see his son. I'm glad that Buffy has a new friend. Can't wait to see what'll happen with Darla. More please. Author's Response: I hope you like what's coming up! Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.10 - 01:26PM 20: Rebellions and Wars Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=93822"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=93822"] I can't believe that Spike has never seen Christopher. That is just wrong. I hope Buffy will be albe to keep it togethr as her family grows. So what do you have up your sleeve next??? So on the edge of my seat. Author's Response: I'm glad you like. I think you'll be pleasantly surprised what comes up in upcoming chapters jenny 2005.12.10 - 02:32AM 20: Rebellions and Wars Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=93730"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=93730"] i can't wait to read more!!! i am in love with your story. i am dying to read what happens between spike and buffy. PLEASE UPDATE SOON? Author's Response: Working on it, I have a bunch of other fics that need attention too! I'm glad you like this one though! Robin 2005.12.08 - 10:19PM 20: Rebellions and Wars Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=93498"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=93498"] Oh my god. I love this story. I can honestly say this is the first time i actually can't stand Spike. I can't believe he didn't even try to see his only son. God he makes me so mad. He doesn' deserve Buffy. Author's Response: I'm glad you like the fic! Please don't Hate Spike too much... ChrissieLinnit 2005.12.08 - 05:12PM 20: Rebellions and Wars Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=93437"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=93437"] Poor Christopher. Poor Buffy. Didn't he even try in all those years? *expletive, expletive* I say let him keep his Dark Princess... he deserves to be shafted by Dru and Angelus. Buffy deserves a partner that loves her before all others. I don't see how you're ever going to write him as loving Buffy and Christopher more than Dru. I want to bash him over the head with Joyce's axe! It won't dust him, I know, but he'll have a bloody headache that he'll remember for a verrry long time. Wonder if I can get a vengeance wish? *looks around hopefully* Author's Response: LOL Ooh yes Spike does deserve an axe to the head, but I think that you will be pleasantly surprised in upcoming chapters "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.08 - 04:14PM 20: Rebellions and Wars Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=93415"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=93415"] Christopher is 16? He grows so fast. 13 years she last saw Spike? And now she is seeing him killing a slayer - and with Drusilla celebrating it. Oh boy - that must have hurt Buffy very deep. And Drusilla knew it. *deep sigh* Speaking of growing fast - Christopher is an old man now, with own children.. and Spike never bothered to came back for him? That's so sad. Darla is there? I wonder if Angelus is around too. And what about the rest - Spike and Dru? (I'm sure we'll find out in the next chapter.) Author's Response: lol, I swear it does get better in the next chapter, sorta...you'll just have to wait for the next chapter! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.04 - 10:18PM 19: Comings and Goings Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92661"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92661"] I am so sorry that Buffy and Spike got to the Immortal too late to save her. I hope Spike and Buffy realize what they are doing to Christopher. He needs his father and I just hope they can keep him safe.. Great update. Author's Response: Thanks jenny 2005.12.04 - 01:35AM 19: Comings and Goings Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92489"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92489"] i absolutely love your story and i can't wait to read some more of it. i really hope that buffy becomes a slayer again though and if not, i'm sure it will be great anyway. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON? Author's Response: thanks for the review! ChrissieLinnit 2005.12.03 - 05:16PM 19: Comings and Goings Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92446"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92446"] This chapter has made me feel quite sad. Spike really does prefer Drusilla to Buffy. He does see her as his, but only because of their previously shared passion, and Christopher. Buffy really does love him and I think that she always will. The only time I can see him coming to her would be if Dru dusts it or kicks him out on his ear... so by default rather than choice. I've decided I don't like this Spike. *pouts sadly* Your writing is good though, yet again! Author's Response: I understand where you are coming from, yes I've written Spike to portray a delinquent dad. Ironic given Buffy's 'profession' Thanks for sticking with the story thus far, given the fact that you don't like this Spike. I swear he gets better! spufette 2005.12.03 - 02:43PM 19: Comings and Goings Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92413"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92413"] You know, I'm beginning to get a little sick and tired of Spike's negligence. I really almost don't like him at all. I almost wish Buffy would just stay completely away from him for eternity. He does not deserve her, and certainly not his son. That said, it takes a very talented writer such as yourself to make me dislike Spike. You have written him in such a way that I I don't hate him, but just don't care for him to be happy anymore either. That's saying alot as I usually defend Spike over anything (LOL). Very good chapter, sad about Annette though. spuf Author's Response: Aww thanks! Burnz 2005.12.03 - 02:18PM 19: Comings and Goings Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92399"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92399"] Poor Christopher being made to leave what is familiar, Hopefully he won't turn out to be a bitter instituitional brat. :) Author's Response: LOL, I hadn't considered that he would. "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.03 - 01:11PM 19: Comings and Goings Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92372"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92372"] Oops - were to late not where.. Author's Response: np "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.12.03 - 01:10PM 19: Comings and Goings Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=92371"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=92371"] I'm sorry Spike and Buffy where to late - Annette is dead. *sigh* They tried. Oh my... Spike is not ready to make Buffy his. That will lead him to not to see his son again so soon. He pays a high prize for - can I called it so? - cowardices. Years he won't never get back. And Christopher isn't happy that he has to go to school. Eton oh my. I wonder under which name Christopher will go to Eton - as William's son? Could bring him into danger from the Immortal. Even if I just read this one - looking forward to the next. Someday it must get better.. I hope. (Spike going back to his family.. I don't hope it will be for the funeral of his son. You know.. because Spike takes so much time. Author's Response: It will get better, I promise! Cas 2005.11.27 - 05:52PM 18: Double Cross Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=91004"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=91004"] Bloody brilliant! Somehow this one missed my notice until I saw it nommed somewhere. Please keep psoting updates frequently. Author's Response: I'll try to keep up the frequent posting, it's getting harder with the holidays approaching though "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.11.26 - 03:52PM 18: Double Cross Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=90811"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=90811"] I finally read through all 18 chapters of this story so far and I am thouroughly enjoying it! Love the original plot line, the angst, Buffy being loves bitch for a change! Hopefully the next chapter will see The Immortal tortured and killed. I have no patience so please update soon! Author's Response: lol, I'm glad you like it! Jessica 2005.11.22 - 12:05AM 18: Double Cross Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=89917"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=89917"] Ooh! Love the twist. I'm glad that the Immortal brought Buffy and Spike together. Maybe they can bond over his torture. Author's Response: Glad you like ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.11.21 - 08:31AM 18: Double Cross Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=89725"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=89725"] I so hope that means she teleported into the house to take out that Immortal scum. Good update. I am really going on the basis that Spike is just playing this up right now. I can't see Spike turning on his own son. That just isn't who he is, vampire or man. Look forward to the next update. Author's Response: *smiles evily* Glad you like! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.11.20 - 06:45PM 18: Double Cross Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=89576"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=89576"] Uh-huh... the fun ends (the holidays): The Immortal has Annette! Oh - poor William got tortured by Drusilla (and still stays with her). Aaaawwwwweeee - loved the fist meeting so cute and yet so childlike: Good. Annette took away Mr. Bananas and I don’t know where she put him. So Spike went in the Immortal's house. But because of what he said first I don't think that he believes that Christopher is not his son. Must be a part of a plan, huh? Author's Response: *smiles evily* Thanks for the review "viewuser.php?uid=230" 2005.11.20 - 04:58PM 18: Double Cross Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=89556"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=89556"] I finally got caught up with this wonderful, original and refreshing story and I'm loving it very much. It's interesting and I just love the twist that in this case, Buffy is the one that loves more. Christopher and Annette are so endearing. And Reagan is a wonderful friend. I can't wait to read how Spike and Buffy are going to rescue Annette. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like my fic! Jessica 2005.11.12 - 12:31AM 17: In the Closet Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=87592"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=87592"] Christopher is adorable. Perhaps we will be seeing Spike again soon? More please. Author's Response: Glad you like Christopher So Spike is proud that Buffy is such a good mother to their son? Well she has to - their son has no father... he is absent. Still with Dru *sigh* Did he stay away because he respected Buffy's wishes or because he had no interest in seeing his son? I don't know but I hope it is the firt one. It's so sad... does he think he will have another child? Children grew so quick and he had missed three years of his son's life. Year that will never come back. Me thinks he is kind of an idiot - and still Dru-whipped. So sad to see this. Author's Response: Thanks for your review spuffette 2005.11.11 - 12:02PM 17: In the Closet Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=87446"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=87446"] I am very pissed at Spike right now, but what's new! Tee hee. Anyway, I really love this story, I just wish Spike would pull his head out of his arse and realize who he belongs with. spuf Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you like the story! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.11.04 - 08:14AM 16: Keeping Silent Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85886"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85886"] I just hope that they can come to terms with what has been happening. I just hope they can figure out a way to get rid of the Immortal and be reunited with baby Christopher. Author's Response: Uh...I promise a happy ending? It's not in the immediate future though... Jessica 2005.11.04 - 02:41AM 16: Keeping Silent Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85837"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85837"] Loved the chapter. But I thought that Spike was very stupid with that question. She told him that she would do anything for him, just so that they could be together. And then he abandons her for his sire. You don't choose who you love, but you do choose who to trust. I can't wait for more. Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter jenny 2005.11.04 - 02:37AM 16: Keeping Silent Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85835"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85835"] i love where this story is going and i can't wait to read more. spike is so cute when he is possessive, gotta love it. anyway, love that he found out the baby is his and not the stupid immortal's. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT UPDATE!!! Author's Response: Glad you like Franchesca 2005.11.03 - 06:36PM 16: Keeping Silent Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85804"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85804"] Well that is just terribly sad. Poor Buffy and stupid Spike. How is this ever going to work. I know... I know... eventually it will. Author's Response: Yes eventually it will, but the drama and angst isn't over yet "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.11.03 - 03:33PM 16: Keeping Silent Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85780"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85780"] Oh my .. that was a hard choice - leaving baby William behind. It must have been very very hard for her. *sigh* If I were Buffy I wouldn't dare to tell Spike too. Not when William is in danger (and Spike still with Drusilla and going back to her). He can't take care of his son - he can't take him with him. Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Kar 2005.11.03 - 02:58PM 16: Keeping Silent Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85775"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85775"] Great chapter!! I do wish Buffy would let Spike see his child, but I know it is too dangerous. Author's Response: Thanks. Only time will tell if Christopher and Spike ever meet. spuffette 2005.11.03 - 02:37PM 16: Keeping Silent Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=85771"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=85771"] I certainly don't blame Buffy for not telling Spike where their child is. In fact, after his ridiculous behavior over loony tunes Drusilla, I'd been so pissed I'd of never told him Chrisopher was his son at all. I'm rather angry with Spike here, can you tell? Great chapter, though! spuf Author's Response: Yes I feel your bitternes. lol. Thanks for the review! Kellie Mulder 2005.10.29 - 01:36AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84593"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84593"] I looooove this story!! It's so interesting and new and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Will this story go all the way into the present? Because I want to see Dawn...cuz I'm hoping to see a decendent of her and Spike. Oh and a Wesley.... And Xander....can't go without a Xander or Willow or a good Giles. Keep it going!!! Author's Response: I'll keep going with the fic! don't worry! I'm glad you like it! Raspy_Luv 2005.10.28 - 08:02PM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84528"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84528"] FUNNY is the part where "D’Hoffryn chastised himself for not paying more attention to the curses that women in labour uttered"! LOL! Author's Response: Glad you like! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.28 - 04:15PM 15: Precious Bundle Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84508"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84508"] Thanks for birthdays that leads to updates :) Still sad to see Spike is with Dru. And Buffy longs for a friend she doesn't have (Rachel). And the curses Buffy said during her labor that got fulfilled :) Especially the one about William breaking up with Dru. :-D Author's Response: Thanks for your review ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.10.28 - 10:34AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84455"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84455"] {Dances around happily} Yeah!! Glad to see an update of this one. I LOVE this story. Loved all of the wishes that Hoffy granted during her mid labor too. I'll bet he pays a lot more attention to women in labor from now on. LOL. I am VERY happy that the baby is William's. I hope that they will be able to get together. I hope the Immortal dies a very painful death ... or is put in eternal turmoil if you don't want to kill him. Look forward to the next update. Author's Response: Thanks Tasha *hugs* your reviews are always to uplifting! I have lots more instore for this unusual family, their tale is far from over. "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.28 - 10:32AM 15: Precious Bundle Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84454"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84454"] aw, pretty. Cant wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks! Kar 2005.10.28 - 07:33AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84430"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84430"] Oh, oh.. more please? Author's Response: lol, It's coming jenny 2005.10.28 - 02:44AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84413"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84413"] you are killing me leaving me hanging like this. i am absolutely in love with your wonderous story. i can't WAIT TO READ MORE AND WHEN DOES SPIKE FIND OUT? I REALLY CAN'T WAIT. PLEASE (FOR MY SANITY) UPDATE SOON? Author's Response: I'm glad you like! katj 2005.10.28 - 01:15AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84405"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84405"] I love it! And I can't wait for Spike to find out about the baby, I hope he comes after her right away. :) Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you like it! Jessica 2005.10.28 - 12:35AM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84396"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84396"] Absolutely wonderful chapter. I'm glad that you updated. And its Spike's son! Very happy news. Loved the thing about the curses of women in labour. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: *squee* thanks so much! "viewuser.php?uid=572" 2005.10.27 - 11:44PM 15: Precious Bundle Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84387"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84387"] Spike is a dick head, totally. But really? He's typical of a male, right? I just hope he's torn to bits, spiritually, when he finds out he is the father! Serves him right! spuf Author's Response: lol, Thanks for your review! Franchesca 2005.10.27 - 11:34PM 15: Precious Bundle Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=84385"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=84385"] With all those wished granted... William is sure to be there shortly. Author's Response: thanks for the review "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.21 - 11:17AM 14: Vengeance Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82880"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82880"] Oh no! What did the Immortal do? Oh my.. I soooo hope the the child is from William (That he is the father) And it's a clever wish that Buffy did make. *g* Widow Fairchilde - Buffy misses him a lot. In a way if everything would have happened the normal way she would have been Mrs. Fairchilde. Awe . Buffy wished to have William's babies? Is it possible to fulfill her own wish? Or is it possible because the wish was for William too? *cross my fingers for it - the child being William's* And now Buffy has killed herself (her human self) again? *giggle*. BTW - writing Buffy is shorter then Elisabeth - therefore you got most of the time Buffy from me. ;-) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.21 - 10:55AM 13: Violation Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82876"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82876"] Sorry I'm late - I skipped this chapter a bit and saw the cliffhanger and decided to wait a bit. But the next one had a cliffhanger too, right? ;-). I'm sorry for Buffy that she has to watch Spike going back to Dru - again. Must be very hard for her. So sorry to see what life was taken from them. Oh no - what did the Immortal do now? Author's Response: Thanks for the review! yes Cliffies are evil, even if I wrote it myself jenny 2005.10.20 - 01:50AM 14: Vengeance Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82641"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82641"] i can't wait until spike finds out what happened with the immortal and the baby. i absolutley love your story and i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Author's Response: I'm so glad you like! Jessica 2005.10.19 - 03:48PM 14: Vengeance Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82459"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82459"] Well that chapter was certainly the best at the end. But I do love where this is going. I hope that Anyanka is right about it being Spike's baby. It was very funny when she died again, and this time by her own hands. ; ) But I can only think of 6 different identities, not 7. Can't wait for more. Please update soon. Author's Response: I'm sure by the end of the fic Buffy will have gone through many more identities, it's what she does afterall. Thanks for your review! "viewuser.php?uid=1194" 2005.10.19 - 12:02PM 14: Vengeance Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82390"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82390"] Great chappy. That was a great wish Buffy did against the Immortal. Cant wait to see how you play this out. Author's Response: Thanks for the review Mary, glad you are liking the fic! ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.10.19 - 11:10AM 14: Vengeance Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82378"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82378"] Good update. Hmmm ... Buffy is pregnant. So hoping that the baby has nothing to do with the Immortal except to see him dead. Hope the baby is William's. {Smiles} I wonder what in the world Spike will say to that if he finds out, and will Dru be able to keep him back if he knows that he and Buffy have a child. Look forward to more,. Author's Response: Thanks Tasha! Franchesca 2005.10.19 - 10:37AM 14: Vengeance Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82366"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82366"] Now I wouldn't have guessed pregnant. But I like the vengance wish. I have faith you will let the baby be William's and hopefully he won't be too much of a pig about this and be the wonderful upstanding Spike who we all know love Bufy so much. Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks! katj 2005.10.19 - 10:25AM 14: Vengeance Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82361"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82361"] Fantastic! It makes my day when this is updated. :) Can't wait for Spike to catch up with Buffy, lol. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! sirc 2005.10.18 - 10:37AM 13: Violation Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=82063"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=82063"] I can't find any words to say to you at the moment, but I thought a lousy review would be better than no review. Uhm.. I like this story, I like your other stories, I like you as an author, (don't know you yet as a person :) ). So, uh.. keep going :D Author's Response: uh...ok I will keep going... glad you like the story! Jessica 2005.10.16 - 11:17PM 13: Violation Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=81681"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=81681"] So it seems as if you already know what we think. Blah blah tease blah blah evil ... More please. ; ) Author's Response: Hehehe, when your beta tells you that you are being a big tease you know that it was an evil place to leave it. ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.10.16 - 11:05PM 13: Violation Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=81676"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=81676"] Very evil place to end it. The Immortal did something to her ... drugged her or something. Without her pendant she is in big trouble. If he's working for the Council at all, she is even more screwed. {Growls at Spike for leaving Buffy as well} If Spike was there, the Immortal wouldn't have come in. Heck the Immortal is probably there just to try and take something away from Angelus and Spike again like he did with Darla and Dru. Please update soon. Author's Response: There is a point to this madness, a tad bit contrived, but in the end...puppies and christmas. Thanks for the review! KAR 2005.10.16 - 02:55PM 13: Violation Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=81564"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=81564"] you are such a tease!! Great chapter Author's Response: Thanks! ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.10.12 - 10:47PM 12: Blood and Lace Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=80721"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=80721"] Look forward to the next update. I wonder if Buffy will go with Spike this time, or if she is going ot let him leave her again. Author's Response: Thanks for the review Tasha! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.11 - 05:27PM 12: Blood and Lace Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=80399"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=80399"] It didn't take Spike that long to hurry back to his Sire... *sigh* And now Elisabeth will stay alone in the flat. No more watcher meetings too. And a yearning for what can't be (living with William, having Kids). Good chapter :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Franchesca 2005.10.10 - 09:06PM 12: Blood and Lace Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=80202"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=80202"] I can't help but think of Giles as our Giles and I really want him to stop being a jerk... and William for that matter. Author's Response: Hmm yes, Giles is being jerk isn't he? "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.03 - 06:00AM 11: Opening Doors Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=78365"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=78365"] Yay! cant wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks Neo! :) Jessica 2005.10.02 - 10:28PM 11: Opening Doors Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=78334"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=78334"] Poor Buffy. I wonder what is going to come of Buffy and Spike's next conversation. Please update again soon. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.10.02 - 05:37PM 11: Opening Doors Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=78277"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=78277"] Well oh well - Spike found Buffy :) And she is glad to see him and yet not.. He has to tell her why he was looking for her - when he knows it himself. Looking forward to find out what he will say to the stuff he overheard :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Jessica 2005.09.24 - 04:26PM 10: Watchers Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76660"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76660"] *pouts* That was not a very nice place to leave it. ; ) I am very curious as to what her reaction to the news about Anyanka and Spike will be. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.24 - 11:51AM 10: Watchers Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76622"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76622"] Poor Buffy! ;-) Miss Cruickshank seems to annoy Buffy a lot. And yeah, it could have been dangeours (blowing her cover) if she had seen Buffy teleporting. And it's true.. after Buffy was the Slayer she is now a vengeance demon hadn has to do her job if she will stay alive. And Spike his on the Buffy, nearer now. But Buffy is now between a rock and a hard place: to find and destroy the demon Anyanka. I wonder how she'll not do it without losing her cover... Author's Response: hehehe, oooh I've got plans for Buffy like you wouldn't believe in this fic, you'll just have to keep reading! ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.09.22 - 01:43PM 9: More than you Bargained for Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76305"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76305"] Definitely looking forward to the next update of this one. Love this story. Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.21 - 04:27PM 9: More than you Bargained for Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76166"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76166"] Now I learned what this fic is is angsty :) Interesting turn of events - Buffy had fled Spike (and I can fully understand why she did it) and seems on her way to become a watcher. From Slayer to V.Demon to Watcher (still being a vengeance demon). But I must say I'm very glad that Spike decided to find her. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Suzee 2005.09.21 - 09:33AM 2: Heartbreak Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76119"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76119"] I really like how this story is going so far and how you managed to pull Cicely and Buffy together for the purpose of hurting WIlliam (though i do hate that scene) Author's Response: Thanks! spufette 2005.09.21 - 07:22AM 9: More than you Bargained for Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76106"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76106"] Good! I hope Spike has to search for years before he finds Buffy. Sorry, I just get so mad when Buffy is hurting. She is my hero you know? LOL spuf Author's Response: hehehe, Spike is being a dope, but then if someone didn't muck things up their wouldn't be a story... Franchesca 2005.09.21 - 01:17AM 9: More than you Bargained for Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76090"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76090"] That ought to keep Spike interested. Author's Response: hehehe, thanks for the review! Jessica 2005.09.20 - 11:49PM 9: More than you Bargained for Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76074"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76074"] I wonder if Buffy realizes that she is stepping into another double life. I really liked this chapter. Can't wait to see what will happen next. More please. Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=536" 2005.09.20 - 11:09PM 9: More than you Bargained for Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=76070"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=76070"] Excellent! I can't wait until Spike and Buffy meet again. :) Author's Response: thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.17 - 03:53AM 8: If Wishes were Vampires Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=75362"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=75362"] Mmm - Buffy met the Immortal. Well - Buffy is immortal too so that's possible that they meet again. ~ Buffy calling for the Order of Aurelius? It didn't make her happy to see Spike again. Thanks for the quick update! Author's Response: Glad you liked! Jessica 2005.09.16 - 08:30PM 8: If Wishes were Vampires Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=75282"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=75282"] So she met the Immortal. Very interesting little conversation they had there. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Glad you like! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.16 - 08:35AM 7: Unmet Expectations Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=75176"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=75176"] Vengeance was turning out to be a sad thing to live on. Buffy is not so fond of her life then? Seems not. So Angelus saw Buffy again. Seems to me that Buffy did win, huh? But only this encounter. Spike? He's still with his family. Author's Response: Thanks for your review Jessica 2005.09.15 - 07:33PM 7: Unmet Expectations Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=75052"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=75052"] Annette is adorable. ; ) Great chapter. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: I'm glad you like Annette! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.12 - 05:13PM 6: The Right Thing, for all the Wrong Reasons Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=74390"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=74390"] All the teleporting is neat :) So they were together, but only for a moment. I wonder if Spike will forgive her what she had to do. Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.12 - 05:06PM 5: Moving On Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=74386"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=74386"] Oh.. Buffy misses her William more than he misses her. But she looked for him and found him. :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.09.12 - 04:58PM 4: Making Peace Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=74384"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=74384"] The part with Elizabeth and Spike was bittersweet, sad - and very moving. I'm glad that Elisabeth is happy now - except that she can't have her William. Author's Response: :) Jessica 2005.09.01 - 05:11PM 5: Moving On Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71887"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71887"] Okay, that wasn't a very nice place to stop. Great chapter though. Can't wait to see how this will turn out. Please update soon. Author's Response: hee hee, sometimes I'm evil ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.08.31 - 09:31PM 5: Moving On Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71695"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71695"] Ooooo, are our two demons going to finally get things intimate? Or will Buffy not be able to go through with it for fear that it is a one time thing? Oh, I hope it isn't a one time thing. I hope Angelus doesn't catch them somehow. That would definitely be bad as soon as he realized that Erixel is Elizabeth. Look forward to more. Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.08.30 - 12:09PM 3: Misery Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71303"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71303"] Oh my – how hard for Buffy! They (the watcher) tried to kill her to continue the slayer line. And Reagan wasn’t aloud to come back… Poor Buffy. She was lucky that she did know some spells. Otherwise, she would really have ended dead. And William got turned. Wonder what will happen when these two meet again (hopefully soon) :)) Author's Response: thanks for the review ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.08.30 - 03:50AM 4: Making Peace Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71226"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71226"] I like how you have her name as Erixel instead of Halfrek. That helps to keep the two very separate in everyone's minds. Great update. I'm glad that she got to tell William that she did love him, etc. That was a great touch. Reagan Wyndham? Now why do I have a feeling that Wesley in the future might have some knowledge of things ... and Rupert Giles ... {smiles} I can't wait for future chapters. Author's Response: Tee hee. I'm really glad that you like the fic thus far. I want to keep everyone in mind that although it seems that I've made Buffy replace Cecily/Halfrek, there will be some very significant differences in the upcoming chapters. As for Wesley's involvement...you will just have to wait and see. Jess 2005.08.30 - 02:13AM 4: Making Peace Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71215"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71215"] Oh wow, I really love this story so far! You had such great ideas, like with buffy also being cecily, buffy becoming a vengeance demon, etc. Great, great job. Though right now my heart is breaking for both of them. But I'm keeping th faith, lol. I can't wait to read more :-) Author's Response: I'm reallly happy that you are enjoying the story. rockerbaby 2005.08.29 - 11:48PM 4: Making Peace Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71188"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71188"] Excellent update. I'm so interested in seeing where this story goes. Please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks! Jessica 2005.08.29 - 03:28PM 3: Misery Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71032"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71032"] Okay I wasn't expecting that. Great twist though. But now I'm going to be looking forward to the next chapter even more. Author's Response: I'm glad you like the twist! Author's Response: I'm glad you like the twist! ~*~Tasha~*~ 2005.08.29 - 01:09PM 3: Misery Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=71010"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=71010"] Oh man ... you have another excellent story in the works here. Wow and dang. Nice work. I can't wait to see wher eyou go with it. Author's Response: Thanks! Jessica 2005.08.27 - 09:33PM 2: Heartbreak Anonymous ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=70652"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=70652"] Such a lovely chapter. This story looks very promising. I hope that you'll update soon. Author's Response: Thank you! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.08.25 - 04:54PM 2: Heartbreak Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=70085"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=70085"] I RR before - ♥ it! Author's Response: Thanks! "viewuser.php?uid=" 2005.08.25 - 04:53PM 1: Underwood and Fairchilde Signed ["reviews.php?action=deletereview&reviewid=70084"]["user.php?action=revres&rid=70084"] I RR before - ♥ it! Author's Response: Thanks Beffin Fic Title and Chapter = All Of The Whole Flipping Story Yes I would like a reply to my review = Yes, I would like a reply to my review comment = I Have Never Read A Story So Beautiful, Brilliant, Inspiring And Tear Creating. This Is The Best Spuffy Fanfic Ive Ever Read In My Entire Time Deedicated To Carrying On The Thought Of Spuffy. You As An Author Inspire Me To Write My Own Stories, Which Unfortunatly Are Not At All Ready To Be Posted Yet, But You Are Definatly My Inspiration. I Would Love For You To Possibly Do A Sequel To This Story. I Hope. All The Best Of Luck. Beffin. Tanja Fic Title and Chapter = Living Vengeance - Ch. 57 comment = Oh my God! This was truly amazing! I loved reading this story SO much! There were times when I wanted to smack Spike around at the beginning when he kept hurting Buffy by returning to his Sire's side everytime they were together and it was so sad and beautiful to read about Buffy's devotion toward the only real love of her life. *Happy sigh*. Oh! And I absolutely loved what you did to Dru! Eh eh eh. Great solution to keep her out of the way without dusting her. I really hope you'll consider writing a sequel, this universe you created is just awesome! Please keep up the amazing work! Irissss Fic Title and Chapter = The Entire Story comment = This was a great story, I have been waiting forever for you to finish it so that I could read the entire thing, it is very well written and a great read. Thank you kw comment = Great story that covers Spike's full existence. However, the Spike-Liz thing still seems really creepy even though they only kissed. EL website: http:// fic-chap: Living Vengence comments: I love this story, have read it at least 3 times. astropistol - Beautiful story! I loved it. I agree with the person in the reviews. Make a sequel =] I sat for hours reading the first one. Would be more than happy to with a sequel. louiise39 comments: Clever and satisfactory. Two evil creatures and their fun Back